2020-2021学年高二英语寒假提升天天练之短文改错-Day-4-含解析.docVIP

Day 4 A 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写岀该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 I was so proud that I heard my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feeling like I could achieve anything. Only three years before, I was terrified of walking or skating on ice. To deal with this, I decided to join skating club. My teacher was great but before I knew it, I was able to skate. He then persuades me to try ice hockey. I loved it and was soon practising with my local team on almost every evening. We’re now training hardly for national competitions and hope to be champion one day, but his ultimate goal is to be an ice hockey teacher and help people learn to play this game. B 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 When my mom drove me home yesterday afternoon, I saw little cat standing on the middle of the road. It seemed very hungry and it was also in great dangers because there were many cars, buses and trucks running on the road. I felt very sadly and I asked my mother that I could bring it home. Although she was afraid of that the cat was dirty, she agreed. However, when I got out, the poor little animal were not there. I was told that it had taken home by the warm-hearted person already. I breathe a sigh of relief. Animals are our good friends and we should care much about it. 答案 A 【答案解析】 1. that→when 2. feeling→feel 3. before→ago 4.在join后面加a 5. but→and 6. persuades→persuaded 7.去掉almost前面的on 8. hardly→hard 9. champion→champions 10. his→my 【分析】 这是一篇记叙文。听到获得冰球比赛冠军的消息后，作者回忆了三年前的艰苦训练过程，并希望以后能成为一名冰球老师。 【详解】1. 考查状语从句。句意：当我听说我们队赢得了冰球比赛时，我感觉如此自豪。根据句意可知，此处不是so…that…的结果状语从句，而是when引导的时间状语从句。故将that改为when。 2. 考查固定搭配。句意：它使我觉得我可以做成任何事情。make作使役动词时结构是make sb. do sth.，所以此处应用feel作宾语补足语。故将