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高一英语作文范文改错 Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents. 答案： 1.have去掉 2.about后的you改为me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning 5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改为but 8.be后加an 9.at→in 10.where后加there Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 答案： 1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。 5. 此行无错。 6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。 7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in?为固定短语， “对??感兴趣”。 9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。 Dear Ralph, Im a senior student. Im getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wa