2020高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练：(二十三)短文改错Word版含解析.doc

2020高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练：(二十三)短文改错Word版含解析 2020高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练：(二十三)短文改错Word版含解析 PAGE / NUMPAGES 2020高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练：(二十三)短文改错Word版含解析 专项技术保分练 (二十三 ) 短文改错 Test 1 [2019 ·成都第二次诊疗 ]Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great.“Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting. 答案与分析： Last year, my friend and I carried two backpacks, that ①which  went to visit the Yellow turned out to be pretty  Mountain. We heavier for ②heavy the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps ③experienced make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my ④made friend encouraged me great . “Look, the top is coming closer and ⑤greatly closer. We are almost there”. I pulled me together and kept going. ⑥myself After ∧ three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful ⑦a sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we ⑧scenery ⑨ To also found a hotel that looked very much inviting. ⑩ that 改为 which 考察定语从句。剖析句子构造可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是 backpacks，应用 which 指引该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。 ②heavier 改为 heavy 考察形容词。剖析句子构造可知，此处 pretty 是副词，相当于 very，并无比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。故将 heavier 改为 heavy。 experiencing 改为 experienced 考察形容词。依据句意可知，此 处表示“我不是一个经验丰富的远足者”，应用 experienced“经验丰富的，有经验的”， experiencing 没有这个意思。 ④make 改为 made 考察动词的时态。 与上文中的“ Last year”响应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。 great 改为 greatly 考察副词。一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用 greatly 修饰动词“ encouraged”。 ⑥me 改为 myself 考察反身代词。与句子的主语 I 响应可知，此处应用 I 的反身代词 myself 作动词 pull 的宾语，表示“使自己抖擞起来”。 ⑦After 后加 a 考察冠词。 hike 是可数名词，被“ three-hour exhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人疲惫不堪的远足”，且 thr