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重庆高考英语作文范文点评 Dear Sir or Madam, Im a student from Chongqing, China. Im very sorry to tell you a serious problem about anendangered animal in our province - finless porpoise. Because of the water pollution, humanhunting and some other reasons, the number of this fish decreased to less than 高级词汇 1000.Its dying out soon without any help 高级句式，介词短语表示条件. I heard that your foundation works on protecting the animals in extinction 高级句式，包含宾语从句 . So Im writing this letter to ask you for help 动词短语使用恰当 . Maybe you can donateto protecting the animals. Or at least 高级句式，副词短语使用恰当, you can come to China toinspect the endangered situation of this species. Can you? 问句使用恰当，加强语气 I really hope my words will be taken seriously, and Ill appreciate it if you respond soon! 句式使用地道优美 Thank you ! Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Sir or Madam, Im a student from Chongqing, China. I write 时态有误，应用现在进行时 this letter to you toreport you the emergent situation of the Chinese Yangtze finless porpoise. Because of thehuman beings influence, the number of this precious species promptly dropped 时态错误，应用现在完成时 to less than l000. As far as I know, your foundation can help those species that are at the edge of extinction, Iwrite 动词时态错误，应用现在进行时 this letter to you to ask for your generous donation toprotect 词性错误，to是介词，后跟名词、代词或动名词 this endangered species. If youreconvenient 汉语式表达，正确句子应为if its convenient to you, would you please come toChina and have a close observation of the poor porpoises and give us aid and direction toprevent them from dying out completely? Thanks for reading my letter and Ill appreciate to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 感谢您的阅读，祝您生活愉快。