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托福写作句子修饰技巧
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句子美化
A :状语前置
在英文写作里,状语前置是一种相当常用的
句式变换手法。
状语前置就是把一个由副词、介词、现在分
词或者动词不定式形成的小短语放在句首。
这种句式最大的好处是让你的句子产生了
一种长短结合的跳跃的节奏感。
新托福作文状语前置用法全集
☆ Historically, in America workers have
been mercilessly exploited by big
corporations. For example, garment industry
workers, railway workers and fruit pickers
were suffering many hardships and paid
very little.
☆ Clearly, this is a positive alternative for
motivated parents and their children.
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☆ Undoubtedly, the most basic elements of
writing are to be found in pictures.
B 句中做手脚
☆ 同理,在新托福作文的句中也经常可以
引入小短语,它会让句子显得更加灵活多
变。
Shopping, a necessary part of daily life, is
increasingly time-consuming ( 消耗时间的 )
in North America.
We ’ II all die in the end, and because of this,
we should cherish every moment of life.
In America, those who move long distances
are generally the kind of people who play
the major role in holding the community
together, in large part because / partly
because they are more confident and have
better career opportunities.
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The internet is a simple collection of screens
改成
☆ The Internet is, simply, a collection of
screens of information ( known as
webpages ) that reside on thousands of
computers around the world.
☆ A positive attitude , after all, is essential
for a student ’s academic performance.
☆ Upon
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