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Word文档下载后（可任意编辑） 第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 1 页 GRE考试写作及解析4 GRE写作范文：GRE考试写作范文及解析4 GRE考试辅导  2018GRE作文官方题库ARGUMENT题目：  The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at OmegaUniversity.  “Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedurethat encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all theirprofessors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign highergrades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risenby thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omegaare inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been assuccessful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. Toenable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should nowterminate student evaluation of professors.”  【满分范文赏析】  In this memo Omega University’s dean points out that Omegagraduates are less successful in getting jobs than Alpha University graduates,despite the fact that during the past 15 years the overall grade average ofOmega students has risen by 30%. The dean indicates that during the past 15years Omega has encouraged its studentsto evaluate the effectiveness of theirprofessors. The dean reasons that student evaluations led professors toincrease grades, which has, in turn, created a perception among employers thatthe grades of Omega graduates are not actually representative of their realquality. The dean concludes that to enable Omega graduates enjoy better job placement,the university must terminate its professor-evaluation procedure. This argumentis unconvincing because it contains several flaws in logic.  【本段结构】本段采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即C—E—F的开头结构。段落首先概括原文的Conclusion，接下来概括原文为支持其结论所引用的一系列evidence，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句，指出原文在逻辑上含有多处Flaw。  【本段功能】本段作为Argument开头段，具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文的结论，即：为了让其毕业生获得更好的工作，Omega大学应该现在停止学生评估教授的程序。本段分布列举了原文为支持其结论所引用的证据——尽管在过去15年内Omega学生的总平均成绩提高了30%，Omega大学的毕业生在就业时不如Alpha大学的毕业生成功、学生对教授的评估导致教授提高成绩，进而使雇主们产生Om