读后续写讲评-暴风雨中死里逃生课件 高考英语作文复习.pptxVIP

读后续写讲评 ---暴风雨中死里逃生 高三英语组 2021年11月7日 1 前文大意： 一场特大暴风雨突然来袭。8岁的Zack的母亲来不及到游泳馆接他。情急之下，救生员Jessica决定开车先将Zack带回到自己家。 2 Para1 Remebering everything she could from her emergency training, Jessica took Zack to the basement. Para2 After a final crash, the sound of the storm grew distant. 3 Step I 先设计故事的结局 暴风雨终于过去了，Zack和母亲团聚。 Step II para1para2的无缝对接 Para2 After a final crash, the sound of the storm grew distant. 第一段一定提到了狂风呼啸，下雨，打雷，玻璃被打碎的声音等。 4 Step III 构思 Para1 Remebering everything she could from her emergency training, Jessica took Zack to the basement. 1.地下室的环境描述 2.环境描写(狂风怒号,电闪雷鸣) 3. Zack的反应(怕；哭) 4.Jessica的反应(动作，语言） Para2 After a final crash, the sound of the storm grew distant. 1.两人的反应（如释重负；相拥而泣） 2. 场景描写 （一片狼藉） 3. Zack的母亲来了（反应，动作，语言） 4. 主题升华：Jessica的勇敢和善良使得Zack 死里逃生。 5 Para1 Remebering everything she could from her emergency training, Jessica took Zack to the basement. 1. 因为停电，地下室里一片漆黑。 With the electricity cut off, it was completely dark in the basement. 2.Jassica 紧紧地握着Zack颤抖的小手，她们小心翼翼地在黑暗中摸索着。 Jassica held Zack’s trembling hand tightly, and they felt their way in the darkness with great caution. 6 3. 最后，她们在窗户边上的一处角落处坐了下来. Finally, they sat down in a corner by the window . 4. 窗外，电闪雷鸣，阴风怒号，仿佛世界末日一般。 Outside, the lightning flashed, the thounder roared, and the furious wind howled, which threatened to put the world to an end. 7 5.小Zack害怕极了,哭了起来,边哭边说：“我要妈妈.” Feeling overwhelmingly scared, little Zack burst into tears, saying, “I miss my mom.” 6. Jessica把他搂到怀里，轻轻地抚摸着他的额头，安慰道：“宝贝!别害怕，一切都会过去的” Jessica held him in his arms and stroked his forehead， saying , “Honey, don’t be afraid! Everything will be all right. ” 8 Para2 After a final crash, the sound of the storm grew distant. 1. 知道暴风雨已经过去了, Jessica如释重负地松了一口气 。 Knowing the storm had died away, Jessic