2018年浙江备战高考英语三轮复习与策略讲练：专题3 应用文写作 类型5 求助信.pdfVIP

类型5| 求助信 1．求助信要简明扼要，语气委婉、真诚，不强人所难，并尽量提供足够的 信息，能使收信人愿意帮助你。 2．写作指导 (1)清晰陈述请求的内容或所要获取的信息； (2)提出的问题数量不宜过多，要便于回答； (3)解释收信人回信的理由并表示感谢。 假如你是某中学的高一学生李明，最近与母亲关系紧张，难以相处。请根据 下表内容用英语给某英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith 写一封80 词左右的求 助信，请他帮你解决问题。 你的情况 你母亲的情况 你的问题 1.学习成绩好； 1.大学教授，工作勤奋，很少 1.与母亲很少交 2.爱母亲； 有时间和你说话； 流； 3.有点害怕母亲。 2.对你严格要求，易发脾气。 2.不知如何沟通。 [习作评阅] ——自我修改三档作文 Dear Mr.Smith， 1.避免词汇搭配错误 I am writing to tell you my problem ① ④处in 改为with troubled me for a long time.It is ②relationshi 2.杜绝语法错误 between my mother and me. ①处troubled 应改成troubling My mother is a university professor ③she ②处应添加冠词the works very hard.She is strict ④in me but she ③处应添加连词and is so busy with her work that she finds little ⑤处easy 改为easily time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in ⑥处exchange 改为exchanged my studies ，but I still feel a little afraid of her 3.要点一定不要遗漏 because she loses her temper ⑤easy.I dont 补上⑦处要点：Id a reciate know how to communicate with her. it if you give me a way out. Maybe its because we have seldom sat down and ⑥exchange our feelings and thoughts.⑦ (如果您能帮助我，我将不胜感激。) Best wishes. Yours sincerely， Li Ming [自我提升] ——向极优作文迈进 高级句型 Dear Mr.Smith， ①处改为定语从句： I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubling me which/that has troubled for a long time.It is the relationship between my me for a long time mother and me. ②