中考英语试卷讲评.pptVIP

* 中考试卷讲评  复习重点词、短语的用法，注重易错点的区分 1 理顺解题思路， 掌握解题技巧和方法。 2 享受交流沟通， 把握展示机会。 3 If we try our best, we’ll be successful. 作文要求 随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇120词左右的短文。开头已给出 现象 弊端 影响与家人、朋友的关系(relationship)；容易引发交通事故；对身心健康有害，不利于学习和工作。 观点 正确利用手机；面对面交流胜过网上聊天…… Para. 1 Para. 2 Para. 3 注意：不要遗漏要点 Paragraph 1：现状 理清脉络 With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. 随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。 [‘f?b?] Paragraph 2：现象、 弊端 1.use smart-phones while eating / getting together with families and friends 1.have serious effects on the relationship with… 弊端 现象： 连词： 影响与家人、朋友的关系(relationship)；容易引发交通事故；对身心健康有害，不利于学习和工作。 besides, what’s more,even worse … 2. use/ concentrate on their phones while crossing the road 2.cause traffic accidents easily 3. be busy with their phones or stay up playing games 3.be bad for their studies and health 句式： ① We should communicate face to face instead of using smart-phones. ② In my opinion, we’d better make good use of smart-phones. Let’s raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers. Paragraph 3: 观点 ①正确利用手机 ②面对面交流胜过网上聊天 ③…… 方式： In my opinion… (1) We should------ (2) we’re supposed to ---- (3) We’d better do --- 写作注意： （1）语言正确，规范地道。 （2）讲究句子的准确性,尽量使用自己熟悉的、已经掌握的词汇和句型。句式不要单一。 （3）保持行文的流畅，注意关联词的使用。 （4）内容完整，不要遗漏要点。 优秀作文： 孙林、鑫瑜、瑞祥、孟桦、长桦 佳文、亚琪、逸辰、鲁宁、雅琦 满分作文：佳慧 孟羽 Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. While eating with family members or getting together with friends, some are always busy playing with their mobile phones. It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends. Even worse, when some people cross the street, they still concentrate on their mobile phones, which can easily c