人物介绍写作训练.pptVIP

1.句子要正确：1).Do you know where is my school? 2). There are many students enjoy  the lessons →Many students enjoy the lessons. →There are many students who  enjoy the lessons. 2.句子要平行 In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. 3.句子要连贯 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. 6.句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry