高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt

基础写作训练;一. 基础写作基本要求 I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性] ;A. 如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题 ; (2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food. 错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. (He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.);(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达多个不同类型的信息内容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.;II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块； who what why when where 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并， 但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便 合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确 表达 ;B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和合适性] 旅行社 travel agency 2. 食物不合味口 the food didn’t agree with us 3. 他讲解清晰,生动。 He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way. His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid. ;4. 货真价实的购物场所 the shops where we could buy good bargains the shops where we could buy nice things with reasonable prices ;1. 我表示对旅行社提供的服务总体感到满意。 I am quite satisfied with the travelling company. I am quite satisfied with the traveler centre. 2.当地导游对游客非常热情，体贴，耐心照顾团中的老人。 John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.;3.导游对游地讲解清晰、生动，增长了我们的见闻。 The interview of the view is clear and funny and it’s clearly that we improve knowledge for John’s direction. ;4. 饭馆提供的膳食不合口味。 我们有些人不得不自买食物。 The diet provided in the restaurant didn’t fit us so many of us and quite a few of us had