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#134:家庭结构和成员 的变化 The structure of families and the role of its members are changing gradually.What kinds of changes are they? Do these changes have a positive effect or negative effect? 主体段一（其他写法） A 人们以事业为导向B 与父母 居住 C 独居家庭增加，不再依靠家庭年长的成员 解释（背景）：经济 大，希望获得更好的生活 解释（背景）：教育，对于职业的需求不同，希望事业成功 解释（A-B）：离开家乡去其他地方工作 拓展思路: 解释（背景）：经济 大，希望获得更好的生活 解释（背景）：教育，对于职业的需求不同，希望事业成功 解释（A-B）：离开家乡去其他地方工作 范文: The family size has e smaller and young people do not rely on elderly relatives as they are increasingly career-oriented and inclined to live far away from their parents. They give priority to their career achievements because higher e enables them to cope with economic pressure and experience an improvement in the standard of living. Another reason is that they are normally college-educated and motivated to achieve more ambitions in their careers. They are less willing to stay in the hometown and live in extended families, as they tend to move to other cities where they can find better employment. 学生观点点评 学生的观点 点评 家庭不断增加，小孩的父母是一 structure 应该针对的是family size ，和 个 ，影响他们的identity 关系不大，而且对identity 的影响 也难说正面还是 。 A.生活成本高B 养孩子的 大C 社 不能够只说家庭小，还要说家庭 的 会上普遍都是小家庭跟以前比。 改变，譬如说，母亲既要赚钱，还要照 顾孩子。 A 老人不能适应现在职场的要求，不能 不能够只说家庭成员的 变化，还要 从事体力活较大的工作B 家里年轻人 说家庭结构的变化。可以说，四代同堂 忙着工作，没时间带小孩儿C 老人退 增加了。 休在家带小孩儿 女性接受教育机会增多很多工作女性 不能够只说家庭成员的 变化，还要 也能胜任与过去相比，现在的女性大多 说家庭结构的变化。可以说女 迟要 数不再是家庭主妇 孩子，家庭变小。 开头段替换词 the structure of families: family size the role of its members: perform duties, assume responsibilities change: undergo some changes, alter gradually=steadily 开头段范例 There have been some significant changes in the family size as well as the duties performed by different memb