Unit4 UsinglanguageWriting（课件）高中英语人教版选择性必修第三册.pptxVIP

UNIT 4;1. To read the article and answer some questions 2. To write an essay about the story of Shackleton and his men on the ship Endurance;Write an essay about the story of Shackleton and his men on the ship Endurance.;　Writing—An essay about a story;审题 写作要求是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇短评，写作中应注意短评的常规格式。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是写一篇短评，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：介绍背景。 第二段：简要介绍这个故事。 第三段：表达自己对这个故事的感受。;1.Once upon a time，there was a... 2.Unfortunately，they were stuck in the... 3.They were very brave in face of... 4.They never gave up and... 5.Later，they managed to do... 6.From this story，we learned that... 7.All of us were moved by the great hero... 8.We should learn something from the great...;第一段： 本故事讲述了欧内斯特·沙克尔顿于1914-1916第一次穿越南极洲的探险。 第二段： 1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。 2.不幸的是，在靠近南极洲时，“坚忍”号被冰块困住，沉进了大洋中。 3.在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到了大象岛上。 ;4.由于在象岛上得到救援机会渺茫，沙克尔顿带着五名船员冒险前往1300公里之外求助。 5.留在岛上的船员在有限的供给下还面临着极端气候和严寒，以及危险的环境。 6.他们不得不保持积极的精神状态。 7.沙克尔顿的目的一直是确保船员的安全，而船员们的目的则是活到他找到帮助为止。 ;第三段： 1.关于这个故事我最喜欢的就是尽管他们的探险没有完成他们的目的，但也没有成为一场灾难。 2.这要归功于沙克尔顿在面临逆境时的勇气和船员们为了长期存活的忍耐力和毅力。;用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。; This story is about the 1914-1916 expedition by Earnest Shackleton to make the first land crossing of Antarctica. Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance. As they approached Antarctica, unfortunately, their ship got stuck in the ice, sinking into the sea. Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island. As there wasnt any chance of being rescued on Elephant Island, Shackleton ventured more than 1,300 kilometers with five of his men to search for help.The crew left behind had to face the extreme weather and cold as well as a dangerous environment and all with limited supplies. All of this added to the mental challenge, so they had to maintain a positive state of mind. Shackleton’s motive was always to make sure his crew survived, and theirs was to last until he had found help. What I like most about this story is that although their