看图作文技巧 高三学生成人礼.pptxVIP

会计学;假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校昨天举办了高三学生成人仪式。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“A Memorable Adulthood Ceremony”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动全过程。 注意：100词左右。 提示词：宣誓 take an oath 国旗 national flag 成人门Adulthood Gate注意： 　　;第2页/共21页;书面表达写作步骤;第二步　认真看图，确立主题 ;第一幅图：我和一个女孩担任主持人 /两个学生担任主 持人 第二幅图：家长代表发言。 第三幅图：面国对旗宣誓 。 第四幅图：手拉手，穿过成人门。 ;第四步　合理想象，补出要点;第三幅图：面国对旗宣誓 ，表达什么呢？ 表达要做合格的公民，为祖国努力学习的决心。 第四幅图：手拉手，穿过成人门，象征什么呢？ 象征我们都是成年人了。;成年礼之后，自己的感受呢？ 我了解了更多成年人这个词的含义，对自己、对家人、对社会承担责任。;第五步 确定时态，译出要点 ;第一幅图; Then a parent representative made a speech, expressing the best wishes and expectations to us, which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents.;第三幅图; 第四幅图 Finally, hand by hand, we went through a so-called “Adulthood Gate”, which symbolized that we are all grown-up! 注意：cross , across, through, 区别;第六步连句成篇，过渡自然 ; Yesterday our school held a memorable adulthood ceremony themed “growth, gratitude and responsibility”. I was honoured to be the host of the ceremony, together with a girl. In the beginning, on behalf of all the students, we expressed our gratitude to our parents and teachers. Then a parent representative made a speech, expressing the best wishes and expectations to us, which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents. ;Afterwards, we took an oath facing the national flag, showing our determination to be a qualified citizen and work hard for our country. Finally, hand by hand, we went through a so-called “Adulthood Gate”, which symbolized that we are all grown-up! After the ceremony, I know more about the meaning of the word “adult”, which attaches a responsibility to myself, to my family and to the society.;优点;存在的主要问题;衡水中学文科状元 袁嘉玮 147分 高考前书写;理科状元 孟祥熙 146分 高考前书写