Responses-to-comments-(英文期刊-审稿意见回复).docVIP

Responses-to-comments-(英文期刊-审稿意见回复) PAGE PAGE 3 Dear Editor-in-Chief in XXXXXXX: Thank you very much for your help in processing the review of our manuscript (Manuscript ID XXXXX). We have carefully read the thoughtful comments from you and reviewers and found that these suggestions are helpful for us to improve our manuscript. On the basis of the enlightening questions and helpful advices, we have now completed the revision of our manuscript. The itemized responses to the reviewers’ comments are listed in the succeeding sheets. We hope that all these corrections and revisions would be satisfactory. Thanks a lot, again. Title: XXX Manuscript type: Article Corresponding author: XXX Full author names: XXX Sincerely, Prof. XXX School of Chemistry and XX Key Laboratory of Controllable Chemistry Reaction Material Chemical Engineering, XX University, Wuhan, Hubei, 430072?, P R China. 201  earlier papers which are no longer novel. ? 4 Any changes or revisions in the text should be highlighted by different color in the revised manuscript compared with that of the previous version. Reply: Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion. All the changes and revisions have been highlighted by cyan. We have revised our manuscript again We have made further modifications on the manuscript, especially the introduction section. The latest revisions are highlighted by green, while previous changes are highlighted by cyan. To be specific: a) Some adjustments about sentence structures have been made to increase the diversity of expression. b) The second example about N-doped carbon materials is relatively early research result published in 2009. Thus we have replaced it with a lasted and outstanding paper. c) The unique effects of S-doping have been expounded in the revision to correspond to the effects of N-doping introduced above. d) In addition to rewriting the part of introduction as you required, we have also polished and revised the chapter