读后续写11班 公开课PPT课件.pptx

读后续写 -----温州卷读后续写讲评; * use different structures（结构） * use transitional words （过渡） * add some details （细节） 1;Focus on the background ;Focus on the main plots（情节）;Focus on the style structure;Focus on the connection of the two given sentences om drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money. Paragraph 2: Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket.;问题1. 寻求段首内在的联系；探究段首与前文的联系;问题2. 关注??在逻辑，避免语言混乱啰嗦。;Focus on the expression;表情神态描写：;;5. She?cast down her ____shyly. 她害羞地垂下了眼睛。 6. He was so upset that he lowered his _____in silence. 他沮丧极了，低头不语。 7. I?was?frightened?by?the?angry?look?in?his?______.? 他眼神里充满愤怒，让我感到害怕。 8. His?______ turned?red?with?anger. 他气得满脸通红. 9. She?had?her?____?up?and______??high?up?in?the?air,? like?shes?the?queen?of?the?world.?? 她一副趾高气昂、目中无人的样子，好像自己是女王一样。;情绪、心理描写：;spirits;down/low;发 声;Lorena ran to Eddie in a hurry and whisom, Lorena ran to the Nike shoother to buy a Nike Jacket as her birthday gift so that she could return it to Eddie. （孙琦）;But Lorena _______that it was not wasting money as long as she bought a e you are wearing this jacket?” Lorena’s heart sank and ______, “I didn’t know it would be so exom.” Eddie _____________, “why didn’t you take good care of my jacket last Wednesday?”