英文满分作文：老人钱自己花还是留给孩子.docxVIP

英文满分作文：老人钱自己花还是留给孩子 作文题目： In some countries, old people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g. holiday) rather than save money for their children. Is it a positive or negative development? 雅思高分范文： Nowadays, an increasing number of retirees opt to allocate their savings to bettering the quality of life instead of putting aside money for their offspring. Personally, this trend is generally advantageous. 解析 讨论的话题是时代更迭带来的观念碰撞。注意：老人花钱在自己身上，题干里还进行了提示“holiday”，相当于暗示钱是花在“提高生活质量”上，未防止走题，建议顺着“holiday”这个举例的思路走，不要强调把钱花在“刚需”上，比如医疗，也不要提“减轻年轻人赡养老人的压力”。 In some parts of the world, it is a tr