中考英语复习话题十教学课件.pptVIP

人与社会 话题十 社会热点与劳动实践 话题写作 考情分析 1 写作指导 2 实战演练 3 考情分析 1 ·第一步 细审题 定要点 ·第二步 分段落 列要点 写作指导 2 ·第三步 扩句子 润加工 ·第四步 连句子 成短文 ·第五步 查全文 得高分 ［2022 福建］假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食①” 为主题的实践活动。请你②结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John 写一封信③，分享活动过程④ 和感受。词数80 左右。 第一步 细审题 定要点 ①审主题：热爱劳动，珍爱粮食 ④审时态：一般现在时 ③审文体：应用文 ②审人称：第一人称 ⑤定要点：活动的时间、地点、内容、感受。 One-Day Experience in Rice Fields Date: June 18 Place: the community farm Activities: Feeling(s): ... learn to harvest （收割）rice help to carry rice pick ears of rice （稻穗） 注意事项 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? ________________________ _________________________________________________ Have you had any experience of this kind? Yours, Li Hua 第二步 分段落 列要点 首段：开门见山，引出话题：用一句话说出自己在田间劳动的一日经历。 中间段：详细介绍活动的时间、地点、活动内容和感受。 结尾：用Have you had any experience of this kind? 这句话来呼应首段（已给出）。 【易错句】 I’m glad tell you me experience in rice fields. 【一般句子】 I’m glad to tell you my experience in rice fields. 【美化句子】 1. ___________________________________ ____________________________________ 第三步 扩句子 润加工 首段 Im glad to tell you my one--day experience in rice fields. 活动时间和地点 【易错句】 In June 18, I and my classmates go to the farm. 【一般句子】 On June 18, my classmates and I went to the farm. 【美化句子】 2. ______________________________________ ______________________________________ 中间段 On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. 活动内容 【易错句】 Some learn to harvest rice. Some help to carry rice, others pick ears of rice. 【一般句子】 Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice, and others picked ears of rice. 中间段 【美化句子】 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. 活动感受 【易错句】 After one-day work, we were tired, and we felt happy. And I came to realize that we should save food from now on. 【一般句子】 After one-day work, we were tired, but we felt happy. And I have