2023年新高考英语满分作文读后续写高分万能句 05 读后续写之 精彩结尾.docxVIP

专题 05 读后续写之精彩结尾 新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破 好的开端需要精彩的结尾，精彩的结尾可以吸引读者的眼球，这是获取高分的关键。 一 主题升华 1 名言警句式结尾升华主题 使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。同时也应当注意具体文本具体分析，使用名言警句合理得当。 【2022年高考浙江卷1月】 One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther. 【译文】有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。听到这个消息，我感到非常遗憾，我想无论如何我都应该去看他。当我带着一些鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出做我们项目的其余工作，他邀请我分享我的想法以完善它。我们开始作为一个优秀的团队工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。我们的辛勤工作得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们精彩的发现非常满意。从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。俗话说，一个人可以走得更远，但一群人可以走得更远。 【结尾升华】Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther. 2 特殊句型结尾升华主题（强调句、倒装句、虚拟语气等） 【2022年新高考全国1卷】 I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a brain disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didn’t take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. 【