2023年高考英语二轮复习：读后续写指导讲义.docx

第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 29 页 2023年高考英语二轮复习：读后续写指导讲义 一、解题思路 步骤1　精读文章，获取记叙文六要素 1.关注标题，浏览全文，获取全文时态及基调。 2.分段获取记叙文when，where，who，what，why，how六要素。 When does it happen？ Where does it happen？ Who is it？ What happens？ Why does it happen？ How does it happen？ 3.梳理线索，勾画文章情节。 特别关注实词：名词、动词、形容词或副词。 情节 Para._ Para._ Para._ Para._ Para._ who what feelings 借鉴叙事模型，归纳出故事的开始、冲突、上升部分、高潮。 步骤2　根据信息提炼文章主题 一般情况下，读后续写都是通过小故事讲述大道理，彰显正能量，弘扬真善美。 步骤3　根据段首句做出合理预测 每一段的段首句有承上启下的作用，故预测思路如下： 1.第一段段首句和原文衔接，并且引出下文。标注出第一段段首句的关键词，合理推测下文将要续写的内容，即故事的下降部分。 2.第二段段首句需要和第一段续写内容衔接，并引出故事的结局。标注出第二段段首句的关键词，反推出第一段的结尾。同时，根据第二段段首句的关键词，预测下文将要续写的内容，即故事的结局。 步骤4　完整勾勒出整个叙事模型 步骤5　构思内容，润色语言 1.每个段落分3个层次构思。 第一段eq \b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(根据段首句续写,展开内容,衔接第二段段首句)) 第二段eq \b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(根据段首句续写,故事结局,呼应/升华主题)) [高分标准] （1）故事要围绕主要人物展开； （2）详细刻画人物角色及其情感； （3）有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑； （4）运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞，使描写生动； （5）第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑合理，语境连贯； （6）续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风格保持一致，思想积极向上。 2.语言风格需要和原文保持一致，采用记叙文常见的描写手法来增加细节。 （1）动作描写；（2）心理描写；（3）肖像描写；（4）场景描写；（5）有效对话；（6）修辞；（7）精辟结尾。 3.采用多样的语法结构及句式。 （1）v.-ing作状语；（2）独立主格；（3）部分倒装；（4）“so...that”句型；（5）with复合结构；（6）从句；（7）常用修辞；（8）名言。 步骤6　誊写清晰，字迹工整 二、题型解读 （2022·新高考卷Ⅰ）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route（路线）through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David，who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong？ He had worked so hard for this event！ I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him，”he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not，and let him decide.” I bit back my frustration（懊恼）.I knew the coach meant well—he t