北京卷-2023年高考英语真题作文深度解读+精彩范文 .docxVIP

优点英语 优点英语 北京卷-2023年高考英语真题作文深度解读+精彩范文 【考题】 书面表达（满分20分） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括: ? ? ? 1．活动形式; ? ? ? 2．活动内容。 注意： ? ? ? 1. 词数100左右; ? ? ? 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ? ? Yours, Li Hua 〖解题思路（列好提纲后三审）〗 写信目的 具体建议 表达希望 〖参考范文 1〗 Dear Jim,???? Delightedly hearing that you are planning a club activity themed? Green Beijing, I am writing to make my suggestions for the event.? To beigin with,?I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing, which will allow participants to experience the beauty of the citys parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation. Another effective activity is planting trees to contribute to the citys green efforts.? ?I hope these suggestions are helpful. Im looking forward to participating in this event and promoting environmental awareness together.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?? ??Yours, ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua 〖参考范文 2〗 Dear Jim, Its great to hear that you are planning a club activity with the theme of Green Beijing. I would share my suggestions with you! Firstly, I suggest you include a visit to some of Beijings famous parks such as the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven. Not only are they beautiful and scenic locations, but they also contain rich cultural and historical significance. Secondly, you could organize a tree planting activity，which could be a collaborative effort with local volunteers or environmental organizations .Finally, you could encourage members of in the city. This helps raise awareness about keeping the city clean. I hope these suggestions give you some inspiration for your club activity. Yours,Li Hua 点评：