课件2018春下册6英wy module8单元写作提升.pdfVIP

Module 8 WY 六年级下册 “按事情的发展顺序法” 写过去发生的事情 获取 课件资源可加 题目：昨天Jim 学会了煮面条。尽管刚开始时他没 有成功，但在 的指导下，他终于学会 了煮面条。请自拟题目，写一篇 80 词左右 的作文。 “按事情的发展顺序法”写过去发生的事情 第一步，确定时态。因为是记叙一件过去发生的事情，所 以要用一般过去时。 ① 第二步，按事情发展的顺序，先写起因 。 第三步，再写Jim 自己煮面条没成功，在 的指导下， ② Jim 学会了煮面条 。 ③ 第四步，最后描述Jim的心情 。 必备词汇：cook noodles 煮面条； put...into...把……放入…… watch TV 看电视 必备句型：：First... Then...首先……然后…… 范文： Learn to Cook Noodles Yesterday Jims’ parents weren’t at home. He felt hungry. ① He cooked noodles for himself. First he put some water and noodles into the pot(锅) ．Then he waited and went to watch TV. The TV show was interesting ， and he liked it so much. He forgot his noodles. When he went to the kitchen, he found his noodles were burnt(烧煳). Luckily, his mum came back. She laughed and then began to teach Jim to cook noodles.② At last ，Jim learned to cook noodles. He was very happy.③ 译文： 学习煮面条 昨天 的父母不在家。他觉得饿了。他给自己煮 面条。 首先他把一些水和面条放进锅里。然后他等着接着 去看电视了。电视 很有趣，他非常喜欢它。他忘了 他的面条。当他去厨房的时候，他发现他的面条被烧煳 了。幸运的是，他的 回来了。她笑了，然后开始教 煮面条。 最后， 学会了煮面条。他很高兴。 小练笔： 生活中你一定有很多有趣的事情吧，选一件 你印象深刻的写下来。请自拟题目，写一篇 100词左右的作文。 参考例文： Learn to Swim On a weekend my father taught me to swim in the river near our house. He said to me, “don’t worry, I think you can do it well.” We went into the water. It was so deep and I was afraid. My father s d at me and taught me how to move my arms and legs. So I was not afraid and began to swim slowly.