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Writing issue 1: introduction • Your introduction should have at least THREE sentences (hook, transition, and thesis statement). • You can lude the definition of the main topic in the introduction. • Avoid using l, talk about, mention, state, express in the thesis statement. • Instead you can use discuss, focus on, outline, ex in, introduce, etc. Writing issue 1: introduction What’s good or bad about the following introduction? Stress is ing a major problem around modern people recently. With the reasing population and improving scientific development, people in the society need to confront with more challenges than before. As a phenomenon produced by modern city, Stress is everywhere in the modern life styles. Writing issue 1: introduction Stress is ing a major problem around modern people recently. With the reasing population and improving scientific development, people in the society need to confront with more challenges than before. As a phenomenon produced by modern city, Stress is everywhere in the modern life styles. There is no clear thesis statement. The hook is there, but what about the transition? The transition between hook and thesis statement is missing. Writing issue 2: thesis statement 1. A clear thesis statement signals the writer’s main ideas. 2. A successful thesis statement functions cooperatively with the topic sentences in the body paragraphs. 3. Thesis statement answers the essay question Writing issue 2: thesis statement What do you think of the following thesis statement? This essay will introduce the ma auses of stress and yze the reasons why those factors lead to stress. Writing issue 2: thesis statement This essay will introduce the ma auses of stress and yze the reasons why those factors lead to stress. T