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范文赏析 （范文1） Directions:?For?this?part,?you?are?allowed?30?minutes?to?write?a?composition?on?the?topic?Travel?Alone?or?Travel?with?a?Companion??You?should?write?at?least?120?words,?and?base?your?composition?on?the?outline?(given?in?Chinese)?below: (1)有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行 (2)两种旅行方式的好处 (3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么? 　　Travel?Alone?or?Travel?with?a?Companion? 　　行文思路 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。 　　 Travel?Alone?or?Travel?with?a?Companion? 　　When?it?comes?to?traveling?away,?different?people?will?offer?different?opinions.?Some?people?like?to?travel?alone,?while?others?prefer?to?travel?with?a?companion.?Of?course,?everyone?has?his?consideration?for?his?preference. 　　Traveling?alone,?one?can?enjoy?more?freedom.?The?traveler?can?arrange?his?tour?as?he?wishes?without?the?trouble?of?humoring?others.?Moreover,?traveling?alone?tend?to?bring?the?traveler?unexpected?surprise,?such?as?making?a?new?friend?and?enjoying?a?different?scenery.?Compared?with?traveling?alone,?traveling?with?a?companion?has?also?its?advantages.?For?one?thing,?the?group?members?can?help?and?look?after?each?other?in?the?journey.?For?another,?traveling?with?others?who?have?same?interest?with?you?can?share?costs?and?experiences?with?them. 　　As?to?me,?I?prefer?to?travel?with?a?companion.?Firstly,?we?can?deal?with?the?possible?problems?and?difficulties?in?the?journey.?Secondly,?I?like?to?share?the?pleasure?of?traveling?with?others.?In?sum,?both?traveling?alone?and?traveling?with?a?companion?have?their?attractions,?and?you?can?find?the?pleasure?from?either?one. 佳句临摩 　　1.When?it?comes?to?traveling?way,?different?people?will?offer?different?opinions. 　　临摩：当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。 1.?When?it?comes?to?whether?we?should?cancel?the?“golden?week”?holiday,?different?people?will?offer?different?opinions.　　　　 2.Compared?with?traveling?alone,?traveling?with?a?compani