《新编大学英语写作》 课件 writing sample analysis Unit 1-3 marriage.pptx

SampleanalysisfocusingonstructureofaparagraphSample1:第一个高大英俊会赚钱。第二个不高不帅有爱心。说明了什么?说明了不高不帅必然是接盘侠。没有外表没有财富还能没有耐心吗？什么都没有估计接盘侠这样的悲剧人物也没有资格当了。人家吃剩也轮不到你尝。天生不是帅哥其实人生已经灰暗了一半。学会忍受歧视学会妥协剩下一半不算太黑暗。

Sample2The?main?reason?for?this?failed?marriage?from?my?point?of?view?is?that?the?couple?have?different?values:?a?fine?life,?a?rough?life.?A?good?feeling?may?last?for?a?while,?but?marriage?is?a?time?when?two?people?have?to?be?together.?So?people?with?different?values?cant?be?together?for?a?long?time?unless?one?of?them?abandons?his?own?opinion.

Sample3Theworstthingisnottostayalone,buttoend