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英语满分作文

英语满分作文

DearBob,

DearBob,

I’m

I’msogladthatyouarecomingtolearnChinesehere.I’vealreadyfoundyou

ahousenearourschool.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutit.

ahousenearourschool.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutit.

YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXin

YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJian

ChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthe

ChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.In

bedroom,

bedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.

Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherrooms

connectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.

Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.

Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.

Hope

Hopeyou’llenjoystayinghere!

Yours,

Yours,

LiHua

LiHua

满分理由

满分理由

本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变

本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变

化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。

化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。

作文：

作文：

DearBob,

DearBob,

I’mgladtohearfrom

I’mgladtohearfromyou.

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Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.

Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.

ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.If

ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.If

youtaketheNo.11bus,itisjustone

youtaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.

It

Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,

a

abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtub

areveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadesk

withchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillb