（高考英语作文炼句）第62篇译文老师笔记.pdf

1.成功是许多人奋斗的目标,但这个目标并非每个人都能实现.在考虑决定一个人在人生中是

否成功的多种因素时,我们最先想到的两个因素是雄心与行动.

Successissomethingthatmanypeoplestrivefor(1.奋斗),butthatnoteveryoneamong

usattains.Whenweconsiderthevariousfactorsthatplayaroleindeterminingwhether

apersonissuccessfulinlife,ambitionandactionaretwoofthefirsttocometomind(2.

马上想起).

1-奋斗strivefor

这里but是连词,并列的是两个定从,补全句子有助于理解：Successis

somethingthatnoteveryoneamongusattains.

词典释义：

strive

[straɪv](stroveorstrived,strivenorstrived)

verbintransitive

ADVANCED

■totryveryhardtodosomethingortomakesomethinghappen,

especiallyforalongtimeoragainstdifficulties(尤指长期或不畏艰

难地)努力,奋斗,力争

•[+toinfinitive]MrRoehaskindledexpectationsthathemust

nowstrivetoliveupto.罗先生激发了人们的期望,现在他必须努力不辜负

这种期望.

•Inherwritingshestroveforabalancebetweeninnovationand

familiarproseforms.她在写作中力图在创新和传统散文形式之间取得平衡.

外刊例句：

Justaswestrivefordiversityinourworkforce,weshouldalsostrivefor

diversityofthoughtandexperienceonour

boards.()

正如我们得努力争取职员多样化一样,我们也得努力让董事会上充满各种各种的

思想与经验.

替换表达：strugglefor/fightfor

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2-马上想起的事情thefirsttocometomind

序数词后一般跟todo形式的非谓语作定语.

词典释义：

come/spring/tomindphrase

ifsomethingcomestomind,suddenlyyourememberitorstartto

thinkaboutit

Theyaskedformycomments,butnothingsprangtomind.

外刊例句：

Ifyouhadtochooseadogbreedtotietogetherthemesofmortality,

disease,depressionandthwartedambition,it’sunlikelythatthefirstto

cometomindwouldbeasmooth-haired

dachshund.()

若要选一种狗与诸如死亡、疾病、沮丧和挫败等主题相联系,那么你首先想到的

肯定不会是那毛茸茸的腊肠狗.

替换表达：occurtosomebody

2.

很多人都有梦想或抱负,但并不是所有人都愿意投入时间和精力去让他们的目标到达终点.

Manypeoplehavedreamsoraspirations,butnotallofthemarewillingtocommitthe

timeandenergy(1.投入时间和精力)requiredtoseetheirgoalsthrough