（高考英语作文炼句）第5篇译文老师笔记.docx

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1.和远程学习相比,传统教学方法能够加强师生间的关系,因为传统教学方法有更多的互动.

Incontrastto?distancelearning(1.远程学习),?traditionalteachingmethods?(2.传统教学方法)cementthelink?(3.加强关系)betweenteachersandstudentsbecausetherearemore?interactions(4.互动).

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1-distance?learning

distance?learning是远程学习的固定表达.

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外刊例句：

Theideathat?distance-learning?programmesarein?somewaythe"poorrelation”oftheMBA,particularlycomparedwithfull-time?programmes,isnolongertenable.(TheEconomist)

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替换词：distance?education/onlinelearning/onlinecourses

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学生错误表达：

(1)??????distant?learning

点评：distance?learning是一个固定表达,不能写成distantlearning

(2)??????remote?education

点评：remote与education不能搭配

(3)??????online?course

点评：应该改为online?courses

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2-traditional?teachingmethods

traditional是比较广义的"传统”,指一代代传下来的习俗、行为、模式、思想等;teaching?methods和methodsofteaching的表达都可以.

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外刊例句：

Thisreversalof?the?traditionalteachingmethods—with?lecturingdoneoutsideclasstimeandtutoring(or"homework”)duringit—is?whatMrKhancalls"theflip”.(TheEconomist)

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学生错误表达：

(1)??????traditional?pedagogy

点评：pedagogy是指"教育学”(thestudyofthemethodsandactivitiesofteaching),与"教学方法”不同.

(2)??????traditional?teachingapproach

点评：traditional?teachingapproach应该改为复数形式traditionalteaching?approaches

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3-?cementthelink

cement作为名词的含义是"水泥”,作为动词"加强、巩固”的含义也就不难理解了.

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词典释义：

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[s?'ment]?verb?transitive???

??巩固?

??tomakesomethingsuchasanagreementor?friendshipstronger?加强,巩固(协议或友谊)??

?Theuniversity'sexchangeschemehas?cemented??itslinkswithmanyotheracademicinstitutions.这所大学的交流计划加强了它与许多其他学术机构的联系.

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外刊例句：

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JamesBondhas?donemorethananyonetocementthelinkbetweenmodernarchitectureandevil?masterminds–IanFlemingevennamedoneofhisbaddiesafterhisarchitect?neighbour,ErnoGoldfinger–butHollywoodingeneralhasdonethesame.(The?Guardian)

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替换词：strengthen/improve/foster?relationship/linkbetweenAandB

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学生错误表达：

(1)??????enhance?thet