2024届山西省一模英语读后续写题目：一次跳伞经历，体验自由坠落课件.pptxVIP

山西省一模读后续写题目;IrecentlywentSKYDIVING!ItssomethingIvebeentalkingabout

doingsincelastyear,buttobehonest,itwasplannedsuperlast

minute…likewithinamatterofafewweeks.

ItallstartedwhenIranintoafriendofminewalkinghomefroma

localfestivalearlierthissummer.Westartedchattingaboutwhatwed

bothbeenuptothissummerandsomehowgotonthesubjectofboth

beinginterestedingoingskydivingsomeday.Myfriend,Denny,said

hedbeonboardifIreallywantedtoscheduleajumpandIwasso

excitedtofinallyhavesomeonetogowith!

;Laterthatnight,wetextedbackandforthanddecidedonourjump

dateafewweeksinthefuture.WhentheverySundaycame,we

werebothFULLofexcitementforourfirstskydivingexperience.He

hadbeenbungeejumpingbeforeandIddonemyfairshareofzip-

lining,butneitherofusfiguredthateitherofthoseofexperiences

wouldprepareusforwhatwehadinstore.

Thedrivetheredidnthappenwithoutaslightdelay.Assoonaswe

gotoffthethrough-wayontotheexittowardsthesmalltownwhere

theskydivingfacilitywas,Dennyscarstartedto

;makeastrangenoise,forcingustopulloveronabusyinterstate

(州际公路).

Only20minutesawayfromWNYSkydiving(theplacewherewe

weregoing),wediscoveredwehadaflattyre(轮胎).Atthatpoint,I

feltprettydefeated.Ourscheduledtimewas4pm—thelast

appointmenttimeoftheday—soIfiguredtheywouldntbeableto

waitforordelaytheoperationsforussincewewereracingagainst

thelight.

Para1:WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)and

hopedforthebest.

Para2:Wewereinformedwewerethefinalhumpofthenight…the

sunsetjump.;文本分析：

讲述了两个孩子第一次跳伞的经历，跳伞前的谋划，前往目的地路途

中所发生的波折，求助AAA帮忙修车，最终赶上了所谓的“落日”跳伞

的机会。本篇读后续写对学生而言较难的原因在于，在叙述故事背景

时铺垫了太长的文本，导致主体事件在一番费力后才浮出水面。此外，

陌生词汇陌生的经历尤其是跳伞这种极限运动，让很多孩子望而却步。

有所见有所为才会有所写，因此难度还是有的。;续写情节发展：

Para1:WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)and

hopedforthebest.