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高二下期中读后续写解读与示范

第二节(满分15分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

人与自我——家庭亲情——对接B1U3

MayaandherolderbrotherMarcuslivedwiththeirgrandma.Theirparents,busywithworkinanothercity,couldonlyreturnhomeduringthewinterholiday.Grandmawasgoodatpaper-cutting,andshedecoratedthewholeroomwithprettyshapesofanimalsandflowers,devotingherselftokeepingMayaandMarcushappy.However,despitehergrandmother'slove,Mayaoftenfeltdeepfrustration,complainingwhyshecouldn'tstaywithherparents.

Asthedaysgrewshorterandcolder,Maya'sexcitementcameback.Sheknewthatwiththearrivalofsnow,thewinterholidaywouldcome,aswellasthereturnofherparents.Oneday,theweatherforecastpredictedsnowduringdaytime,soMayaeagerlyrosefrombed,pressinghernoseagainstthewindow,andwaitingforthefirstprettysnowflaketodropfromthesky.

However,asitwasgettinglate,Maya'sexcitementturnedintodisappointment.Sensinghersadness,grandmacomfortedher,“Bepatient,dear.Thesnowwillcomesoon.”Marcus,too,triedtobeanolderbrother,remindingMayathatthesnowcouldfallatnight.Yet,despitetheirefforts,Mayaremainedupset.Nightfellandnotasinglesnowflakewasinsight.Sadly,Mayawenttobedwithouteatinganything,goingtoherdreamswithtearsinhereyes.

注意：

1.词数应为120个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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TocheerMayaup,grandmaandMarcusdecidedtomakesnowflakesthemselves.________________________

第一段续写：为了让Maya开心，祖母和Marcus决定自己制作雪花。——本段续写的关键在于祖母与Marcus通过彼此的爱为Maya制作手工雪花，同时考虑语篇材料的结尾和二段提示句的内容得知，本段的结尾要有时间的变化——即“出现第二天清晨”——参考词汇有：Marcus；grandma；snowflakes；Maya；window；glass；devoteoneselftopaper-cutting

分析与示范：

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TocheerMayaup,grandmaandMarcusdecidedtomakesnowflakesthemselves.Grandmaimmediatelydevotedherselftopaper-cutting,makingeachpaperinherhandsthenbecomeelegantanddelicatesnowflakes.Atthesametime,Marcuswenttogreatlengthtolearnhowtoma