满分写作周周赢 PPTThursday　练应用文写作.pptx

满分写作周周赢应用文写作/读后续写·高中英语赢在微点高中英语满分写作周周赢Week1建议信改变成长类读后续写Thursday练应用文写作Week1Writing1建议信针对学校空地如何利用的建议假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。学校操场后面有一大块空地。学校现征求学生建议如何利用该空地。请给你们的外籍校长Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:1.你的建议;2.建议的理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(请参考素材1“建议”,附录一)范文DearMr.Smith,I’mLiHua,aseniorthreestudentofourschool.I’mwritingtosuggesttheuseoftheleft?outareabehindourschoolplayground.Havinggoodsoilthere,wecanusetheareatodevelopaschoolvegetablegarden.Firstly,itwillnotonlybeautifytheschool,butprovideagreatwayforstudentstolearnaboutgardening.Besides,studentswillgainhands?onexperiencebygrowingtheirownfoodandtastingthevegetablesoftheirlabor.What’smore,itmightraisesomestudents’interestinagriculturalscience.Hopefully,you’llgivemysuggestionsomethought.Yourssincerely,LiHua审题谋篇审题①体裁:建议信②人称:第一人称、第三人称③时态:一般将来时、一般现在时谋篇三段式结构:①首段:开门见山,说明写信意图②主体段落:具体的建议③尾段:表达希望?满分靓词①beautify/?bju?t?fa?/vt.美化②hands?onexperience实践经验;亲身经历;亲身体验③raiseone’sinterest提高某人的兴趣衔接过渡①firstly首先②besides另外③what’smore另外④hopefully有望满分句式Writing2建议信建议如何消除妈妈的顾虑假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Lynn来信说她即将上大学而她的妈妈担心她的生活自理能力。她不知该如何消除妈妈的顾虑。请你给Lynn回一封信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议并说明理由。