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策略四精美打造续写的龙头和凤尾

一、高分开头5大法宝

如何写好读后续写，在高考中博取阅卷老师的眼球，获得梦寐以求的高分？如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出？一个好的故事开头就好比是一个香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地读完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，一定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。“Wellbegunishalfdone！”可见写好一个故事的开头是多么的重要。下面教你五招高分开头的方式。

法宝1巧用形容词/副词(短语)

①[2022·新高考全国Ⅰ]Disappointedandfrustrated,Davidhunghishead,tryingtoavoideyecontactwithme.

②Exhaustedandhungry，Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.

③Curioustoknowwhatwasinside，hetiptoedintothedarkcave.

④[2020·浙江7月]Afewminuteslater，thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thebearroaredatus，ourfrightenedmouthswideopen.

⑤Happilyandexcitedly，theywenttothesupermarketforwhattheyneeded.

法宝2巧用分词(短语)

①[2022·新高考全国Ⅰ]Seeinghisfacefilledwithanxiety,Ifeltsad,decidingtotalksomethingwithhim.

②[2020·浙江1月]Afewweekslatertheboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Hurryinghome，hecouldntwaittoseehisoldfriendPoppy.

③[2018·浙江6月]Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround，wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.

法宝3巧用高级句式

①[2022·南京市模拟一]Ittookalongtimebeforeweacceptedthefactthathewasmissing.(同位语从句)

②[2021·浙江1月]Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Mybrothercameupwithanideathathecouldcutthepumpkinwithaknife.

③[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ]WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohnsidea，shethoughtitwasagoodone，too.SotheytookimmediateactionasJohnhadproposed.(时间状语从句)

④[2020·浙江7月]Attheverymoment，thehelicopterarrived.Ithoveredoverthecamp，causingstrongwindthatblewthebearunsteadyonhisfeet.(非谓语动词＋定语从句)

法宝4巧用倒装结构

①[2020·浙江1月]Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.HardlyhadthelittledogcomeoutwhenPoppycameovertolickitasifitwerealong-lostfriend.

②[2020·浙江7月]Attheverymoment，thehelicopterarrived.Soloudwasthenoiseofthehelicopterthatthebearseemedtobedisturbedforawhile.

③[2018·浙江6月]Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Igotafright，sodidmyhorse.

法宝5巧用