2024高考英语新课标I作文部分解析+课件-2025届高三上学期英语作文复习专项.pptxVIP

书

面

表

达

本写作任务要求考生写一封邮件和外国朋友分享自己的户外美术课经历，属于半开放性作文。

Step1:认真审题

Step2:构思结构

Step3:写作要点

Step4:润色成文

Step1:认真审题

假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,LiHua

文体：邮件

时态：一般过去时

Step2:构思结构

Para.1

Para.2

Para.3

画作形式

画作主题

画作色调

画作风格

画作技巧

Step3:写作要点

Para.1

Para.2

Para.3

画作主题

humanandnature:alittleboylooksafteraninjuredbird

naturalbeauty:peacefullake,greentreesandcolorfulflowers

画作形式

画作色调

vividbrilliantgorgeousradiantdazzling

watercolorpaintingoilpaintingtraditionalChinesepainting

Thepaintingclassintheparkstirsourdesiretobesurroundedbynaturesbeauty,drawinspirationfromit,andreconnectwiththeenvironment.

Theparksettingpromotesapeacefulandcalmingenvironmentforustoimmerseourselvesintheprocessofpainting.

Step4:润色成文

DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Ipaintedatouchingsceneintheparkwherealittleboywasrescuinganinjuredbird.Thegreengrassbeneath,thecolorfulflowersaround,andthecrystal-clearblueskymerged.Ialsopaidattentiontothelightandshadowtomakethepaintingmorevivid.

Thisexperiencewastrulyremarkable.Thepeacefulatmosphereallowedmetotrulyimmersemyselfinthecreativeprocess,losingmyselfinthestrokesandcolors.Ireallyenjoyedthisspecialartclassandtheopportunityitgavemetoexpressandsharethismeaningfulstorythroughmypainting.

Ihopeyouwillappreciatemyworkandthatwecanenjoyasimilarpaintingexperiencetogether.

Yours,