2023年1月14日雅思考试机经·写作 - repeated crimes.docx

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Someex-prisonerscommitcrimesafterbeingreleasedfromtheprison.Whatdoyouthinkisthecause?Howcanitbesolved?

该题目在大陆考区2020年11月7日出现过类似的题目：Peoplecontinuetocommitcrimesevenafterbeingpunishedforit.Whydoyouthinkthishappens?Howcancrimebestopped?本周的题目对一些词汇进行了替换，换汤不换药。

针对让我们分析原因、优缺点（本篇未作要求，但是会有），最终提出解决方案的文章，烤鸭们要注意主体段落分点之间的关联性。以这一题目为例，咱们可以将重复犯罪的原因分为主观和客观，那么解决方案也要从扭转罪犯主观思维和为他们创造客观条件出发。于是便有了这样的思路和范围：

范文思路：

原因：

1.未意识到错误；

2.无技能；

3.受歧视无法融入社会；

阻止：

1.再教育；

2.职业培训；

3.提供工作机会、社会宣传接纳释放者。

Afterbeingsentencedandimprisonedforyears,thenewly-releasedmaycontinuetoviolatethelawandthreatenpublicsecurity.Apartfromthosehavingdevelopedanti-socialpersonalities,mostofthemcommitfurthercrimesoutofseveralobjectiveandoccasionally-ignoredreasonsand,ifmeasurescouldbetaken,theywouldmergeintothesocietymoresmoothlyandcrimeratethusreduces.

Thereareseveralobstaclesagainstprisons’rehabilitation.Forone,therearenotenougheducationtocriminalsonthedegreeofdamagethattheircrimebehaviorhasdonetothevictimsandsocietyeventheyhavebeendeprivedoffreedomalready.Anothersignificantblockcomesfromtheharshconditionswhentheyaresetfree,theyarehardlyequippedwithanyworkingskillstoearntheirlivings,whichisespeciallytruethosewithlong-term

imprisonment.Tomakemattersworse,peopleusuallydiscriminatethemaspotentialcriminalsandtheseprejudicesteadilykeepthemawayfromnormallivesandstablejobs.

Topreventcontinuouscrimes,governmentsshouldhaveprisonersrecognizethefaultsbyorganizinglectures,seminarsaswellaslearningsessionsandensureregretfortheirmistakes.Afterthat,inordertoensuretheirrehabilitationafterservingtheirsentences,prisonsshouldhavethembetterpreparedbyfosteringtheirdecentverbalandbehavioralhabitsandcultivatesomespecializedworkingskills,whichcanbeextremelyhelpfulforlifeandwork.Exceptthee