专题06 应用文写作(解析版)(1).docx

专题06应用文写作

高频话题01告知信/通知

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（2022-2023年度·山东泰安·高一泰安一中校考期中）

假设你是红星中学的李华，你的英国笔友Jimmy想了解你在居家网课期间是如何锻炼身体的。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1.你的做法；

2.锻炼给你带来的好处。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

DearJimmy,

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Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJimmy,

It’sgreattohearfromyou!I’mgladyou’reinterestedinhowIexerciseduringonlineclasses.

Stayingactiveisanimportantpartofmylife,soIamexploringnewwaystokeepitathome.Actually,it’smucheasierthanIthought.I’vefoundsomeusefulworkoutvideosfromtheinternet,andkeepfollowingthe15-minuteprogramtwiceaday.Besides,I’vepreparedinexpensivefitnessequipment,suchasjumpropeanddumbbells,andinvolvetheseexercisesintomyworkoutplan.

ThoughIcannotgotomyfavoritebasketballcourtandplaytogetherwithmyfriendsnow,IamstillhealthyandenergeticformystudythankstotheseexercisesIkeepdoingeveryday.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向英国笔友Jimmy写信，向其介绍居家网课期间是如何锻炼身体的。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：important→essential

事实上：actually→infact

此外：besides→what’smore

由于：thanksto→dueto/owingto/becauseof

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’vefoundsomeusefulworkoutvideosfromtheinternet,andkeepfollowingthe15-minuteprogramtwiceaday.

拓展句：I’vefoundsomeusefulworkoutvideosthatarefromtheinternet,andkeepfollowingthe15-minuteprogramtwiceaday.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mgladyou’reinterestedinhowIexerciseduringonlineclasses.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】ThoughIcannotgotomyfavoritebasketballcourtandplaytogetherwithmyfriend