2025年高考英语专题复习—读后续写微技巧：精炼语言确保首尾照应.pdfVIP

2025年高考英语专题复习—读后续写微技巧：精炼语言确

保首尾照应

【真题再现】

(2023·浙江1月高考)

Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycar

outsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmany

years.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),

desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomove

herwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.

Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebroken

windowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,

closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.

WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbright

eyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempt

tofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoo

thirsty?

AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,she

begantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.

Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,this

tinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutof

sight.

Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthe

window.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhena

hummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersonto

personuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcall

andwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosa