中考英语三轮冲刺复习课件-重点题型讲评 专项28.pptVIP

背书打卡:本节课作文范文[时间截止按各自老师要求]2.专项29：一~四3.纠错:专项28**专项28生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……现在某英文报纸就分享(Sharing)话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你和他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯。2.100词左右。3.文中不能出现真实姓名，地名，校名。走进中考作文主题:sharing人称:第一人称时态：一般过去时内容：思路点拨开篇点题：分享的意义和重要性时态：一般现在时开头正文结尾描述一次你和他人分享的经历，并发表感悟注意：一般过去时总结上文：发起号召，让大家学会分享时态：一般现在时Learningtoshareisanimportantsteptoliveahappylife.Becauseitcanincreasethepleasureandreducethesadness.范文赏析开篇点题：表明分享的意义Inourlife,sharingisimportantforeveryone.Ifweshareourexperience,knowledgeandlovewithothers,ourlifewillbecomemoreinteresting.Ihadanexperienceofsharing.Whenmyfamilymovedtoanewplace,Ihadtogotoanewschoolandstudyinanewclass.ThefirsttestmademesonervousthatIfailed.IgotworriedandfelthelplessuntiloneofmynewclassmatescameuptomeandaskedsoftlyifIneededhelp.AfterItoldhimaboutmyproblem,hegavemesomeadvice.Fromthenon,wegottoknoweachotherandsharedourideas,problems,andhappiness.Webecamegoodfriends.Sharingwithfriendshelpedmebringbackmyconfidenceandgetalongwellwithothers.范文赏析描述一次你和他人分享的经历，并发表感悟亮点1：使用了多种形容词表达感受，使文章的表达更丰富。亮点2：使用了sothat句型，动名词做主语，if引导的宾语从句,when和until引导的时间状语从句，使整篇文章句型丰富不单一。Inaword,sharingcanbringusalotofbenefits.Solet’sbereadytosharesomethingwithothers.范文赏析结尾：总结上文，发起号召Inaword,sharingisnotonlyinterestingbutalsohelpfulanditmakesusfitinwellwithothers.Wecanlearnalotfromsharingandwecanalsoenjoyourlivesmorebysharingwithothers．Learningtoshareisanimportantsteptoliveahappylife.Becauseitcanincreasethepleasureandreducethesadness.Ihadanexperienceofsharing.Whenmyfamilymovedtoanewplace,Ihadtogotoanewschoolandstudyinanewclass.ThefirsttestmademesonervousthatIfailed