2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从完美自画像到展现本真的蜕变+课件.pptx

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从完美自画像到展现本真的蜕变1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文I’vealwaysconsideredarttobe“mything”,theareawherehourstransformintothegracefuldanceofbrushesonpapers.Itwasasimpleday.Ifinishedmyotherclassesbeforegoingtomyfavoriteclass-art.Myteacher,abeautifulwomanwhoalwayssmiled,assignedourfinaltaskoftheyear:finishaself-portrait(自画像).Ihadn’tdoneonesincesecondgrade.Thiswasgoingtobeaninterestingchallenge.IlookedthroughmyphotoalbumsassoonasIreturnedhome.ThefirstpictureIfoundwasmein7thgrade.Hmm.Myteethlookedalittlestrange.Thenextpicturewasmewithmyfriend.Ugh,therewasagiantdotonmycheek.Thethirdpicturewasmewithmylittlesister.Whatwasmyhairdoing?IdecidedIcouldn’tuseanyofthesephotographs.4

续写原文Iwenttomyroomandpulledupmymirror,face-to-facewithmyreflection.Istartedwiththeoutline.First,Icaptured(捕捉)theshapeofmyface.Isettledonsomeoddmixturebetweenoval(椭圆)andcircular(圆).Then,Icontinuedsketching(素描)theeyes,nose,mouth,earsandfinallymyhair.TheoutlinetookawhilebecauseIwantedittobebeautiful.ThenIworkedontheactualpaintingprocessforafewdays,makingsureeverydetailwasperfect.Finally,Ifinisheditaweekearly.Ipresentedittomyteacher,wholookedoveritandsighed,“Butweneedtodiscussthe...”5

段首句Paragraph1：Afterarrivinghome,Ilookedinthemirroragain.Paragraph2：WhenIsubmittedtheupdatedportrait,myteachersmiledandproposedtoshowitatanexhibition.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8作者一直热爱艺术，在美术课上老师布置了画自画像的期末作业。回家后作者翻看相册找不到合适参考，便对着镜子开始创作。作者精心勾勒轮廓，细致描绘五官和头发，提前一周完成了作品。然而当作者把作品交给老师时，老师欲言又止，似乎作品存在问题。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1：Afterarrivinghome,Ilookedinthemirroragain.回到家后，我又一次看向镜子。我仔细地端详着自己的模样，回想起老师那声叹息，突然恍然大悟。之前画的自画像虽然看起来很完美，每一处细节都处理得很好，但却没有展现出真实的我