高考英语复习读后续写练习：创作自画像：从挑战到收获的艺术之旅 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习创作自画像：从挑战到收获的艺术之旅1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文I’vealwaysconsideredarttobe“mything”,theareawherehourstransformintothegracefuldanceofbrushesonpapers.Itwasasimpleday.Ifinishedmyotherclassesbeforegoingtomyfavoriteclass-art.Myteacher,abeautifulwomanwhoalwayssmiled,assignedourfinaltaskoftheyear:finishaself-portrait(自画像).Ihadn’tdoneonesincesecondgrade.Thiswasgoingtobeaninterestingchallenge.IlookedthroughmyphotoalbumsassoonasIreturnedhome.ThefirstpictureIfoundwasmein7thgrade.Hmm.Myteethlookedalittlestrange.Thenextpicturewasmewithmyfriend.Ugh,therewasagiantdotonmycheek.Thethirdpicturewasmewithmylittlesister.Whatwasmyhairdoing?IdecidedIcouldn’tuseanyofthesephotographs.4

续写原文Iwenttomyroomandpulledupmymirror,face-to-facewithmyreflection.Istartedwiththeoutline.First,Icaptured(捕捉)theshapeofmyface.Isettledonsomeoddmixturebetweenoval(椭圆)andcircular(圆).Then,Icontinuedsketching(素描)theeyes,nose,mouth,earsandfinallymyhair.TheoutlinetookawhilebecauseIwantedittobebeautiful.ThenIworkedontheactualpaintingprocessforafewdays,makingsureeverydetailwasperfect.Finally,Ifinisheditaweekearly.Ipresentedittomyteacher,wholookedoveritandsighed,“Butweneedtodiscussthe...”5

段首句Paragraph1：Afterarrivinghome,Ilookedinthemirroragain.Paragraph2：WhenIsubmittedtheupdatedportrait,myteachersmiledandproposedtoshowitatanexhibition.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8作者一直热爱艺术，认为艺术是自己的专长。某天艺术课上，老师布置了年度最后一项任务——完成一幅自画像。作者回家后找参考照片，却不满意找到的照片。于是对着镜子开始创作，精心勾勒轮廓，细致描绘五官和头发，历经几天完成画作并提前一周交给老师。然而老师看过画后欲言又止，似乎有话要说。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1：Afterarrivinghome,Ilookedinthemirroragain.回到家后，我又一次看向镜子。回想起老师那欲言又止的表情，我心里充满了疑惑。我仔细端详着自己的脸，突然发现画中的自己似