高考英语复习读后续写练习：勇敢之举：从怯懦到救助小猫 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习勇敢之举：从怯懦到救助小猫1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文IwasshywhenIwasthirteen.Iwasalsowhatmostteacherswouldcalla“goodkid.”Ifollowedtherulesandrarelyquestionedauthority.Butthenoneday,onesinglerideonaschoolbuschangedallthat.Theschoolbusthatdaywascrowded,hotandsmelly.Thewindowswereallrolledup—thedriver’sorder—itwassimplyrainingtoohardtohavethemdown.Myclassmateswereengagedinheatedconversationsandgames.Thedriverhadshoutedatseveralkidswhohadbeenstandingupintheirseatsandyelling.4

续写原文Isataloneasusual,speakingtonoone.Overandover,IcarefullywipedasmallcirclethroughthecloudonmywindowsothatIcouldlookoutside.Peopleracedhereandthere,graspingumbrellasorcoveringtheirheadswithjackets.Thebusstopped,waitingforanaccidenttoclear.AsIsatquietly,waitingandwatching,Isawakittyacrossthestreetontheothersideoftheroad.Hewasallwetanddidn’tseemtoknowhowtogetoutoftherain.Iwantedtogogetthekitty,butIknewthebusdriver,Mrs.Foster,wouldneverallowmeoffthebus.Itwasagainsttherulestoevenstandup.IalsothoughtifIpointedoutthepitifulcat,theotherkidswouldprobablythinkthatIwasweird(奇怪的),evenweirderthantheyalreadythoughtIwas.Ididn’twantthingstogetanyworsethantheywere.5

续写原文Mywindowwascloudyagain,andwhenIwipeditclear,Icouldseethekittywasstrugglinginwhatseemedtobeafloodedriver.Hewasnowuptohisneckincoldwater,buthislittlefrontpawswereholdingontothebarscoveringthestormdrain(排水沟).Isawabsoluteterrorinhisdark,roundeyes.6

段首句Paragraph1：Manythoughtsracedthroughmymind.Paragraph2：Everyonestoppedtalkingandlookedatme,waiting.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析913岁的“我”性格腼腆，是老师眼中的“乖孩子”，严格遵守规则。一天，乘坐拥挤闷热的校车时，因大雨车窗紧闭。“我”透过擦净的车窗，看到街对面一只小猫在雨中挣扎，被困在积水里，眼中满是恐惧。“我”想救小猫，却因害怕违反规则和被同学嘲笑而犹豫。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记