外研版（2024）新教材七年级英语下册Unit 1 单元主题写作 课件.pptxVIP

;一、主题分析

本单元的话题为“幸福的秘密”，主要谈论了什么让你快乐、怎样才能过上幸福的生活等。本单元的书面表达围绕此话题展开。;二、素材积累

(一)常用词汇:

touch//rich//poor//themostmagicalpart//side//exciting//surprised//experience//helpothers//family//happyplace//keytohappiness//love//inone’smind//toone’ssurprise//joinin//befullof//inone’sheart;(二)常用句型:

开头句

1.It’simportanttohelpothers.

2.Whenpeoplehelpeachother,itmakestheworld...

3.Infact,happinessisalwaysaroundyou.;中间句

1.LastSunday,Iwentswimmingwith...

2.Suddenlyweheardsomeoneshout,“Help!Help!”

3.Itriedmybestto...

4.Finally,wehelpedsb....

5.Yesterdaytherewassomethingwrongwithmybike...;结尾句

1.Helpingotherpeoplemakes...feel...

2.Ifeveryonehelpsothers,ourworldwillbecome...;三、以读促写

乐于助人是中华民族的传统美德，见义勇为更体现了新时代舍己为人的精神。请根据表格内容提示补全Smith的演讲稿，60词左右。;Time(时间);Hello,everyone!Todaymytopicis“Helpingothersmakesushappy”.

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Ifeveryonehelpsothers,ourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Pleaseremember:Helpingothersmakesushappy.Thankyou!;写作指导

1.六要素法——时间、地点、人物、事件、结果及感受;

2.正确使用be动词、实义动词的过去式;

3.主题:人与社会——见义勇为、助人为乐;

子主题:勇救落水儿童;

4.时态:一般过去时。;写作提纲;范文赏析

Hello,everyone!Todaymytopicis“Helpingothersmakesushappy”.

LastSaturday,myfriendandIwentswimmingintherivernearmyhouse.Thereweremanykidsplayingintheriver.Suddenlyweheard“Help!Help!”Weswamthere.Aboycouldn’tswimwellandfellintothewater.;Wetriedourbesttopullhimoutofwater.Whenhisparentsgotthere,theboygotbetter.Theythankedusagainandagain.Wefeltveryhappy.

Ifeveryonehelpsothers,ourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Pleaseremember:Helpingothersmakesushappy.Thankyou!;名师点评

作者根据题目要求，运用“六要素法”讲述了此次救人的全过程，要点齐全，英语得体，行文流畅。

添彩点:

亮点词汇:goswimming去游泳;fallinto掉进；tryone’sbest尽最大努力

精彩句式:灵活使用了therebe句式、when引导的时间状语从句等，使本文更加出彩。;四、迁移写作

有些人认为幸福很难得到，其实