2025届高考英语读后续写写作讲评及挖空训练 课件(共32张PPT).pptxVIP

读后续写讲评及训练（ContiuationWriting）高考英语

1）短文内容：内容的丰富性、故事发展的合理性、续写的完整性；2）词汇语法：使用语言的多样性、准确性和恰当性（语言为交际服务，不可一味使用所谓“高级”词汇，要与原文语言特点保持一致）；3）篇章结构：上下文的衔接（包括续写段落之间的衔接）连贯性；评分原则

4）写作规范:①词数少于130的，扣2分；②拼写和标点符号错误多，将分数降低一个档次；③书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。评分原则

四步答题法：阅读—拟稿—润色—成稿Step1Read（阅读）：理清故事情节，找出5W+1H；画出关键词，预测后续故事。1.Makesenseofthemainplotsofthepassage.2.Analyzethetwogivensentencesunderlinethekeywordstopredictwhatistofollow.写作步骤

Step2Draft（拟稿）Workoutanoutline.Step3Polish（润色）1.Usethekeywordsandphrasesinthepassage.2.Usedifferentsentencestructures.写作步骤

①复合句（包括主语、宾语、表语、同位语、定语和状语从句）②倒装句否定词置于句首(2)Only+状语置于句首③强调句型Itis...that(who)...1.句式要丰富

④固定结构too...to...so...that...not...until...notonly...butalso...neither...nor...1.句式要丰富

①使用高级词汇Heisagoodstudent.(excellent,extraordinary)②使用短语Ilikemusic.(befondof,beinterestedin)③使用谚语Asthesayinggoes,“…”Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.（适用于自编名言）2.使用高级词汇及短语

?并列：and;also;too;aswellas?选择：or;either…or?原因：because(of);owingto;dueto;thanksto?结果：so;therefore;thus;asaresult?比较：onthecontrary;comparedto?转折：but;yet;however?递进：besides;moreover;inaddition?举例：forexample;suchas;thatis;take...forexample3.使用连接词

使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺。Checkwhethertheverbformsandwordspellingiscorrect.Step4Present（成稿）Producethefinalwork.写作步骤

读后续写挖空训练指导

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2024南昌一模）JumpingOverBoundariesWhenIwasinelementaryschool,wehadanannualsportsday.Girlscoulddomanythingslikehopscotch,jumprope,tetherball,anddodgeball,excepthighjumping.Onlyboyscoulddohighjumping.That’swhatIwantedtodo—highjumping.SoIwenttothecoach.“Girlsdon’tdohighjumping,”thecoachsaid.“Girlshavealltheseotherthingstheycando.”Heexcitedlydescribedhowmuchfunitwouldbe.I’dbeenhighjumpinginthebackyardwithmyfivebrothersforyears.A