高考英语写作专题复习：读后续写 露西和杰克音乐比赛 讲义 .docx

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

LucyandherfriendJacklovedbeingatschooleverydaybecausetheybothreallyenjoyedmusiclessons.Lucybeganplayingtwoinstruments,thepianoandtheviolin,butsheenjoyed

singingmore.ShedreamedofbeingapopstarlikeAlexPepperoneday.Jackhadaguitarandplayedpopandrockmusicverywell.Hewantedtobethecoolestguitarplayerintheworld.

Oneday,theirmusicteacher,Mr.Brown,saidtotheclass,Weregoingtohaveamusic

competitionhereatschoolnextFriday.Ifyouwanttoenter,youmustsingorplayasongontheschoolstage.AlexPepperwillbeherethatdayforhisconcertatCityStadium,soIwrotetohismanagerandaskedhimtocomeandgiveyousomeguidance.Hesgoingtodecidethebest

performerandinvitehimorhertohisconcert.

LucyandJackdeterminedtotakepartinthecompetitionasateam.TheychoseasongcalledIllhelpyou!Theypracticedontheplaygroundintheirsparetime.LucymadesuchgreatprogressthatJackwasdeeplyabsorbedinhersingingandoftensaidadmirably,Howsweetyourvoice

is!Whiletheypracitced,thebranchesofthetreesaroundtheplaygroundwereswaying(摇摆)inthewindasiftheywereenjoyingtheirperformance.

Ontheafternoonofthecompetition,allthestudentswerewaitingintheschoolhallforAlexPeppertoarrive.WhenhewalkedinwithMr.Brown,everyoneclapped.AlexsmiledandwavedandthenheandMr.Brownsatdownonspecialseatsinfrontoftheschoolstage.

Thenthecompetitionstarted.LotsofotherstudentssangbeforeJackandLucy.AnoldergirlnamedMarysangverywell.SomestudentsshoutedMore!More!whenshefinished.Shes

goingtowin,thoughtLucy.SoonMr.BrownpointedtoJackandLucyandcalledoutthatitwas

theirturn.注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:

Lucybegantotrembleunknowinglywhenshestoodinthemiddleofthestage.

Paragraph2:

Thebigmomentcame.

露西和杰克音乐比赛

续写要点

第一段要点：在Lucy克服紧张情绪表演的过程中，增加对观众反应的细节描写，如有