高中英语2025届高考读后续写常用高分句式（动作描写+环境描写）.docVIP

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读后续写高分句式

一、动作描写

1.基础动作描写句式

【肢体动作类】

Hebentdowntopickupthefallenbook,hisfingerstremblingslightly.

Shereachedoutherhandhesitantly,thenwithdrewitquickly.

Withadeepbreath,hestraightenedhisbackandsteppedforward.

【面部表情类】

Afaintsmileflickeredacrossherfacebeforedisappearing.

Hiseyeswidenedinsurprise,thennarrowedinsuspicion.

Tearswelledupinhereyesbutdidntfall.

【行走移动类】

Shetiptoedacrosstheroom,carefulnottomakeasound.

Hestaggeredbackwards,barelykeepinghisbalance.

Theytrudgedthroughthesnow,theirfootstepsleavingdeepprints.

2.情感驱动动作句式

【喜悦/兴奋】

Jumpingupanddown,sheclappedherhandsindelight.

HisfacelituplikeaChristmastreewhenhesawthegift.

Shespunaroundinacircle,herlaughterfillingtheair.

【愤怒/沮丧】

Heslammedthedoorshutwithsuchforcethatthewindowsrattled.

Shekickedattheground,sendingasmallcloudofdustintotheair.

Hishandsballedintotightfistsathissides.

【恐惧/紧张】

Herbreathcameinshort,raggedgaspsasshebackedaway.

Hefrozelikeadeercaughtinheadlights.

Shebitherlowerlipnervously,hereyesdartingaroundtheroom.

3.复合动作描写句式

【连续动作】

Rubbinghistemples,hesigheddeeplyandleanedbackinthechair.

Shewipedhersweatypalmsonherjeansbeforereachingforthedoorknob.

Afterhesitatingforamoment,hesquaredhisshouldersandknockedfirmly.

【伴随状态】

Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shecontinuedtopackherbelongings.

Hishandsshakinguncontrollably,hestruggledtoinsertthekeyintothelock.

Heartpoundingwildly,shetookthefirststepontothestage.

【对比动作】

Whilehiswordswerecalm,hisfingersdrummedananxiousrhythmonthetable.

Shesmiledbrightlyatthecrowd,thoughherkneesthreatenedtobuckle.

Outwardlycomposed,insidehewasscreaming.

4.高级修辞动作句式

【比喻类】

Herhandsflutteredlikenervousbirdsasshespoke.

Hemovedthroughthecrowdlikeahotknifethroughbutter.

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