赏英文歌曲积写作促写作提升.pptx

2025届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写专题;TeachingLearningObjectives

1.AppreciateEnglishsongsandaccumulate

materialsforcontinuationwriting.

2.Usethismaterialinsentencesandcontinuation

writingflexibly.;

Step1:语法填空

阅读下列短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Sinceyouleftyearsago,I____1____(lose)myselfandyou.____2_____(stand)onthissnowymountainhigh,Ifeeltheicywindblow.Watchingtheboundlesslake,withharshwind____3____(bite)myface,and____4_____(fail)toseethesunnyblueskyonthehighlandIsetmyselffree,Ikeep___5____mindyouhavetoldmeyouwouldneverleavefromme.___6_____withthosemigrantbirdstotheSouth,youflyfaraway.Likethekitethatgoesastray,yourpromisenowislosing___7____(it)way.Ihavewaitedlongforthecomingspring____8____bringsmewarmdays.Iwilluntilthesnowonmountains_____9____(melt)downintothesea.Ourloveistofadeaway.Neverwillwebackto____10____pastdays.;Step2?Appreciatethesongandcheckyouranswer

Playthesong

Key:1.havelost(动词的时态语态)

2.Standing?(-ing形式作状语)

3.biting??(-ing形式作宾语补足语；with复合结构)

4.failing?(-ing形式作状语)

5.in?(介词)

6.But/Yet?(并列连词)?

7.its?(形容词性物主代词)

8.that/which?(定语从句的关系词)

9.melts?(动词的时态语态)

10.the(定冠词)

;Step3?Analysisofthesonglyrics;

ExtractionofWritingpatterns

?读后续写写作句型“杀手锏”之非谓语动词

作状语和with复合结构

?修辞手法之比喻

?定语从句

?倒装结构;

?读后续写写作句型“杀手锏”之非谓语动词作状语和with复合结构

1.Standingonthissnowymountainhigh,?Ifeeltheicywindblow.站在这高耸的雪山上，我感受着寒风呼啸。(伴随状语)

Watchingtheboundlesslake,withharshwindbitingmyface,?failingtoseethesunnyblueskyonthehighlandIsetmyselffree,Ikeepinmindyouhavetoldmeyouwouldneverleavefromme.

?(伴随状语；with的复合结构作伴随状语)

望着茫茫的湖面，凛冽的风刺痛我的脸颊，在那曾让我尽情释放自我的高原上，不见晴朗蓝天。我始终铭记，你曾对我说，永远不会离我而去。

;?修辞手法之比喻?定语从句

?倒装结构

2.Like?thekitethatgoesastray,?yourpromisenowislosingitsway.(simile明喻)

?withharshwindbitingmyface?(metaphor隐喻；暗喻)

3.Ihavewaitedlongforthecomingspringthatbringsmewarmday