2025年冀教版七年级上册英语Unit 1单元写作.pptxVIP

;写作维度

本单元的话题是“写学校与学校生活”，相关的写作通常涉及几个方面：（1）介绍学校环境及设施；（2）描述学校生活；（3）介绍学校科目。;写作支架/模板;黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)

开头段

①AmongalltheplacesI’vevisited,Ilovemyschoolthemost.

②Myschoolisalivelyplacefulloffriendsandteachers.;中间段

①Mymathsteacherhasbrighteyesandabigsmile.Shemakesmathsclassfun.

②Shewritesclearlyontheblackboardandusesfunnystoriestoteachusdifficultproblems.

③MybestfriendLucyishelpful.Sheoftenlendsmehercolourfulpensandsharessnackswithmeduringbreaks.;④Ourclassroomisonthesecondfloor,withabookshelffullofstorybooksandabigworldmaponthewall.

⑤Wehaveahugeartroom.Wepaintpicturesandmakepaperhandicraftsthere.

⑥Theschoolgardenisourfavouriteplace.There,weenjoytheflowersandwatchbutterfliesflyaround.;结尾段

①Myschoolhelpsmegrowsmarterandbraver,andI’mthankfulforeverydayhere.

②Everyteacherandclassmatebringsjoytomyschoollifeandmakesitunforgettable.

③Let’streasureourschooldaysandcreatewonderfulmemoriesthatwilllastforever.;经典例题(从经典例题中学会审题)

学校是我们获取知识的殿堂，助力你我迈向友谊的天地。在成长的道路上，老师和同学总是给予我们很多的帮助。假如你校正在开展以“MySchoolLife”为题的英语写作比赛，请根据思维导图写一篇70词左右的短文介绍一下你的学校生活。;审要点：学校生活，老师，同学等;精彩范文展示

MySchoolLife

Aschoolisaplaceforstudentstolearnknowledgeandmakefriends.Ilikemyschoollifeverymuch.

First,theteachersinmyschoolareverykindtous.Theyalwaysgiveusahandwhenweneedhelp.Second,thestudentsareveryfriendlyandImademanyfriendshere.;Third,ourschoolhasateachingbuilding,alibrary,alabandaplayground.Last,myfavouritesubjectisChinesebecauseIcanlearnalotofknowledge.Itishelpfulforme.

Inaword,myschoollifeisrichandcolourful.;【亮点词块】

makefriends交朋友

alotof大量；许多

inaword总而言之;【高分句子】

Theyalwaysgiveusahandwhenweneedhelp.（含when引导的时间状语从句的复合句）当我们需要帮助时，他们总是伸出援手。

...becauseIcanlearnalotofknowledge.（because引导原因状语从句）……因为我可以学到很多知识。;实战演练

假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示给你在英国的笔友Dan