（新高考 I 卷）作文整理.doc

2020年高考英语真题试卷（新课标Ⅰ）

八、书面表达（满分25分）（共1题；共25分）

19.你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1）人物简介；

2）尊敬和爱戴的原因。

注意：

1）词数100左右；

2）短文题目和首句已为你写好。

ThepersonIrespect

Wehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.

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19.【答案】参考范文：

ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：提纲类作文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主，兼用一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分法要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）respectable；asforme；spare；accompany；patiently;overcome；bravely第三步：连词成句1.Wehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.2.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.3.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.4.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.5.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.6.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.7.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.8.So,inmymind