外研版七年级上册英语精品教学课件 Unit 3 写作提优练.pptVIP

**写作提优练写作提优练Unit3Familyties【写作导引】本单元以“家庭”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“和谐家庭”这一主题群,主要介绍家庭的意义及家人之间的关系。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①记录自己印象深刻的家庭故事;②探索家庭的意义;③如何建立和谐的家庭关系等。【写作任务】在你的成长过程中,父亲一定做了许多让你感动或者印象深刻的事情。TeenTimes杂志正在组织“感恩父亲”的征文活动,请以“FatherandI”为题写一篇短文,参加本次活动。内容包括：1.描述一件发生在父亲和你之间的事情;2.你的感受或对你的影响;3.表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。注意：1.不能在文中出现真实姓名;2.语句连贯,词数不少于60。【精彩范文】FatherandIWeneedlove.Wealsoneedtoloveothers.ThepersonIlovemostismyfather.IrememberitwasaSundaymorning.Itwasaverysadmomentbecauseof1a“C”inmyEnglishtest.Myfathersawmysadfaceandwantedtohelpme.Heinvitedmetoclimbamountain2.Itwasveryhigh.SoonIfeltsotiredthatIwantedtogiveup.5Myfatherencouragedmetobestrong3andgavemeahandwhenIfeltlikegivingup.SoIkeptonclimbing.Atlast,wereachedthetopofthemountaintogether.Withthehelpofmyfather,Ilearntthatstickingtomydream4isimportant.6Fromthenon,Istudiedhardandmadegreatprogress.Father’slovemaybesilent.Butlikeamountain,itisalwaysthere.亮点词块1becauseof由于2invitedmetoclimbamountain邀请我爬山3encouragedmetobestrong鼓励我要坚强4stickingtomydream坚持我的梦想高分句子5SoonIfeltsotiredthatIwantedtogiveup.(结果状语从句)很快我就感到累了以至于我想放弃。6Withthehelpofmyfather,Ilearntthatstickingtomydreamisimportant.(宾语从句)在父亲的帮助下,我懂得了坚持梦想的重要性。跟踪演练请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记,记叙爸爸出差期间,妈妈生病,你照顾她的过程。注意：1.可适当发挥,增加细节;2.词数：不少于60。参考词汇：goonabusinesstrip出差;immediately立即;medicine药_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihaveahappyfamily.Myparentsarekindandtheylovemesomuch.Ilovethemdeeplyan