人教版七年级上册英语精品教学课件 Unit 7 写作提优练.pptVIP

**写作提优练Unit7HappyBirthday!写作提优练[写作导引]本单元写作主题是“生日或生日聚会”。属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①生日情况描述;②生日礼物购买过程;③各国生日习俗及差异。[写作任务]对于我们每个人来说，生日是一个特殊的日子，有着重要的意义。周二是学校英语社团活动日，这周大家聊的话题是“Howdoyoucelebrateyourbirthday?”。假如你是社团成员李明，请你根据提示内容写一篇英语短文介绍自己是如何过生日的。1.Whenisyourbirthday?2.Whodoyoucelebrateitwith?3.Whatfooddoyouhaveonthatday?4.Whatactivitiesdoyouliketodoonyourbirthday?要求:1．参考提示内容，可适当发挥;2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整;3．文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;4．词数:不少于70。Hello,everyone!I’mLiMing.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]Hello,everyone!I’mLiMing.I’m13,andmybirthdayisonOctober26th.Iusuallycelebratemybirthdaywithmyparentsandmysister.Onthisday,myparentsoftentakemetoanicerestaurant.Wehaveabigdinner①andthereisalwaysabowloflongnoodles②forme.③Thentheysingmeabirthdaysongandgivemegifts.Afterthat,weenjoyadeliciouscaketogether.Ilovecelebratingmybirthday.Howhappyweare!④亮点词块①haveabigdinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐②abowloflongnoodles一碗长寿面高分句子③Wehaveabigdinnerandthereisalwaysabowloflongnoodlesforme.(therebe句型)我们吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，而且总是给我一碗长寿面。④Howhappyweare!(How引导的感叹句)我们多么快乐啊!跟踪演练假如你叫玛丽(Mary)，请根据思维导图提示的内容，向你的朋友介绍一下你是怎样庆祝生日的。要求:1.短文应包括思维导图的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯;2.内容充实，可适当发挥;3.不少于70词。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)I’mMary.LetmetellyouhowIcelebratemybirthday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mMary.LetmetellyouhowIcelebratemybirthday.MybirthdayisonOctober20th.Onthatday,Iusuallyhaveapartywithmyfriendstocelebrateatmyhome.Myparentsalwayspreparealotofvegetablesandfruit.Mymotheralwaysmakesabigcakeforme.TheysingtheHappyBirthdaysong.ThenImakeawishandblowoutthecand