人教版七年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 6 写作能力提升练 (9).pptVIP

UNIT6写作能力提升练

假如你是你校英语广播站的记者，你们学校的游泳俱乐部组织了一次海滩游玩活动。请你根据如下提示，为本次活动做一次现场报道。Whatistheweatherlike?Whataretheteachersandstudentsdoing?Howdothestudentsfeelaboutit?

注意：1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2.词数80左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hi,everyone!Now,it’s11o’clockinthemorning.________________________________________________________________________________________________________

［审题指导］1.体裁：本文是一篇现场报道，为材料作文2.人称：以第三人称为主3.时态：现在进行时和一般现在时4.提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可以结合自己的生活实际适当增加细节，注意保持主谓一致性。

［思路构建］

Hi,everyone!Now,its11oclockinthemorning.Weareonthebeach.Theweatherissunnyandhot.Whatarethestudentsintheswimmingclubdoingonthebeach?Look!Someofthemareswimminginthesea.Someareflyingkiteshappily.Someareplayingwithsand.Othersareplayingbeachvolleyball.OurteachersMr.LiandMissYangaretakingawalkoverthere.Theyaretalkingaboutourschoolwork.Manystudentsthinkthatthisactivityisveryinteresting.Althoughitisalittlehot,everyoneishavingagoodtime!［精彩范文］

1.准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺、条理清晰。2.Someofthemareswimminginthesea.Someare...Othersareplayingbeachvolleyball.的使用使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。3.although引导的让步状语从句的使用，使文章句式更丰富。高分点评：

下面句子均有1-2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.It’swindandcloudtoday. ________________________________________Itswindyandcloudytoday.

2.It’srainyhardnow,andwearewatchTVathome. __________________________________________________3.Manychildrenlikemakesnowmanonsnowydays. _________________________________________________Itsraininghardnow，andwearewatchingTVathome.Manychildrenlikemakingsnowmenonsnowydays.

4.It’sinterestedtoflykiteinspring. ________________________________________5.Althoughwearetiringandhungry,butweallenjoyourselves! __________________________________________________Itsinterestingtoflykitesinspring.Althoughwearetiredandhungry，weallenjoyourselves!

嘿，朋友，此时此刻，你正在做什么呢？Mike和他的朋友们正在不同的地方度假。现在请